Tuesday, 19 March 2013


Assalamualaikum. Hello guys. Today I am absent but I have MC to give Miss Zu. I give Zubaidah to submit my argumentative essay. So, they are my full essay. I do not have many idea to write.

Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive. Agree or disagree with this statement. Support your opinion with reasons and examples.

Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive. In this era of globalization, women are more successful than men and becoming more independent. Although the number of women more than men that are strong claim that men are becoming bolder than women because men is leader in family.
Firstly, women more aggressive than men because they want to protect themselves. Nowadays, many criminal cases in Malaysia such as murder, burglary, shoplifting and other serious crime. No woman wants to find herself in a dangerous situation, but it happens. According to Rape, Abuse and Incent National Network (RAINN), someone in the US is sexually assaulted every two minutes, while the National Network to End Domestic Violence (NNEDV) reports that three women die every day as a result of domestic violence. For precaution, women must to learn martial arts like taekwondo. Nevertheless, men are rescuer when women have a big problem.
Besides that, most university students are women. We can take example from UiTM students which are 75% students are women and 25% students are men. Women very hard working when study and need to struggle to get good job after he graduated. On the other hand, women must know that men are leader for women include leader of the class or organization. In addition, we can take example from Prime Minister in Malaysia which are all prime minister is men.
Some people may disagree with this idea, women more aggressive than men because women bring their problems to workplace. Women more emotional stress than men because of sensitivity to hormone, said Fiona.M. (2010). Many women change their appearances to become border than men with have reached higher positions in workplace that are same level with men in a workplace. Nonetheless, men hide their problems to workplace. They are very intelligent to solve their personal problems than women.
In conclusion, women still need men to encourage them to achieve successful in their life and men is a role model for women to protect them from any dangerous.

Fiona, M (2010, June 2010).Mail Online. Women more prone to emotional stress than men          “because of sensitivity to hormone”. Retrieved March 15, 2013, from      http://www.dailymail.co.uk/health/article-1286817/Women-prone-emotional-stress-men-       sensitivity-hormone.html

Monday, 18 March 2013



Wednesday, 13 March 2013

Argumentative Essay

Assalamualaikum. Today Miss Zu teaches us about Argumentative essay. She said argumentative essay must have words “should be”. For example you have been asked to write an article entitled “Why Sports Should Be made Compulsory in School” for your College bulletin. Now, I can understand how to differentiate types of essay. Miss Zu gives topic about “Organ Donation Should Be Encouraged among Malaysian”. She wants our classes do the thesis statement. Then Miss Zu chooses Sarah and Bariah thesis statement for give example to our class. Sarah agree in the thesis statement while Bariah disagree in the thesis statement.

So, thesis statements agree:
Although, organ donation brings negative perception towards Malaysian society, here are strong evidence that organ donation should be encouraged among Malaysian to give a second life to the patient.

Thesis statements disagree:
Despite the claim that organ donation is seen as noble action and gives benefit towards people who needed, organ donation should not be encouraged among Malaysian because it can affect not only the donors but as well as the donors’ family.  

Before end the class, Miss Zu give homework to our class which are write argumentative essay. The topics that she gives are “Women are becoming bolder as well as more aggressive and men are more sensitive. Agree or disagree with this statement. Support your opinion with reasons and examples”. We must submit an essay at Monday, 18 March 2013.