Today we are present our thesis statement and one of thesis statement had been accepted. Alhamdulillah. I and Zubaidah very happy when Miss Zu said "I accept your thesis statement". We prepared three thesis statement which are:
1) Although the government authorized students to bring hand phone to school, there are strong claims that bringing hand phone to school will bring more negative result than positive ones.
1) Although the government authorized students to bring hand phone to school, there are strong claims that bringing hand phone to school will bring more negative result than positive ones.
2) However, hand phone has become one of the major addictions among secondary school students, although it can cause many social problems like take and share pornographic pictures or videos.
3) Due to the various negative impact and shortcomings they bring, bringing handphone school are not allowed.
So, the thesis statement that Miss Zu had been accepted are number 1.
"Although the government authorized students to bring hand phone to
school, there are strong claims that bringing hand phone to school will
bring more negative result than positive ones"
this is what you get after you struggle to complete it..in my point of view based on your thesis statement, i agree what you againts to because it is good for the student to pay attention towards their study in class.
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